IELTS Writing Task 1 Academic.
if
you want to improve
your IELTS writing here practice with this table. When
you are finished look at the model answer. The table above shows the in
which sector of the economy different age groups were employed.
Summarize
the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making
comparisons where relevant
The
maps show how the seaside town of Templeton changed between 2000 and 2013.
Overall, it is clear that the town underwent a considerable transformation over
the period.
On
the west side of the river, a number of developments occurred. Blocks of flats
replaced the houses north and east of the lake with more houses also being
built to the south. Between the sea and the extension of the railway along the
sea front, the houses and trees gave way to more blocks of flats and a
supermarket.
On
the east side, a new airport was constructed northwest of the school with new
houses being put up north of the hospital. The railway in the east of the town
was extended south and then along the sea front. A car ferry was built in the
southeast with a factory replacing the houses and the trees.
The
town appears to be more built-up and less green in 2013 compared to 2000. (159
words)
Comments: This is a good model answer, which
covers all the key points. There is a clear overview in the introduction with a
further comment at the end. The answer contains a range of vocabulary and the
sentences are well constructed with a variety of structures.
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Sunday, 14 December 2014
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