Sunday 14 December 2014

IELTS Writing Task 1 Academic. 
if you want to improve your IELTS writing  here  practice with this table.  When you are finished look at the model answer. The table above shows the in which sector of the economy different age groups were employed.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant



The maps show how the seaside town of Templeton changed between 2000 and 2013. Overall, it is clear that the town underwent a considerable transformation over the period.
On the west side of the river, a number of developments occurred. Blocks of flats replaced the houses north and east of the lake with more houses also being built to the south. Between the sea and the extension of the railway along the sea front, the houses and trees gave way to more blocks of flats and a supermarket.
On the east side, a new airport was constructed northwest of the school with new houses being put up north of the hospital. The railway in the east of the town was extended south and then along the sea front. A car ferry was built in the southeast with a factory replacing the houses and the trees.
The town appears to be more built-up and less green in 2013 compared to 2000. (159 words)

Comments: This is a good model answer, which covers all the key points. There is a clear overview in the introduction with a further comment at the end. The answer contains a range of vocabulary and the sentences are well constructed with a variety of structures.

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